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Re: GYE Haiku 10 Apr 2013 21:25 #204832

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Machmir about rhymes
To compose Haiku sublimes
Must rhyme all 3 lines!
!אנא עבדא דקודשא בריך הוא

וּבְיָדְךָ כֹּחַ וּגְבוּרָה וּבְיָדְךָ לְגַדֵּל וּלְחַזֵּק לַכֹּל


"If it would be so easy there wouldn't be a GYE, but if it would be impossible there also wouldn't be a GYE."
"Sometimes a hard decision leads to an easier outcome."
- General Grant


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Re: GYE Haiku 10 Apr 2013 21:26 #204834

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who the gehennom
cares so much about a small
little addendum?

Re: GYE Haiku 10 Apr 2013 21:29 #204835

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i wrote the reply
before i saw what the guy [uhhh]
oy nothing rhymes sigh...
Last Edit: 10 Apr 2013 21:30 by inastruggle.

Re: GYE Haiku 10 Apr 2013 21:34 #204839

inastruggle wrote:
... i know it doesn't have to rhyme. i'm a machmir


machmir eiyer shpeiz
mahmeh, machmir eiyer shpeiz
machmir eiyer shpeiz

Re: GYE Haiku 10 Apr 2013 21:37 #204841

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dentist from Memphis
pulling lions teeth with fist
easy just like this
Sometimes life is like tuna with not enough mayonaise
~Inna beshem ZS

Give, Forgive
~Cordnoy

The reason I'm acting as if I'm pregnant, is because I'm expecting. I should be accepting.
~TZ

Re: GYE Haiku 10 Apr 2013 21:44 #204843

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one observation
the identification
caused consternation

Re: GYE Haiku 10 Apr 2013 21:50 #204844

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is it a dentist?
a malach or a getshke
that is the question
Last Edit: 20 Apr 2013 00:15 by inastruggle.

Re: GYE Haiku 10 Apr 2013 21:51 #204845

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Machshovo Tova wrote:
inastruggle wrote:
... i know it doesn't have to rhyme. i'm a machmir


machmir eiyer shpeiz
mahmeh, machmir eiyer shpeiz
machmir eiyer shpeiz

hungry?
poor me poor me
pour me some woodford
?דער באשעפער לאווט מיך אייביג. וויפיל לאוו איך עהם
My Creator loves me at all times. How great is my love for him?

Re: GYE Haiku 10 Apr 2013 21:55 #204846

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the drink of woodford
makes everything rhyme again
life is good my friend

Re: GYE Haiku 11 Apr 2013 07:08 #204884

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Exhausted I am
Go to sleep I will shortly
Too tired to write
Roy in the SA White Book noted that we frequently prayed and it did not work...because the best we could muster was begging G-d to "Please take it away, so I will not have to give it up!

No amount of sobriety can cure the insanity -ChaimCharlie

The emmes hurts but fake chizzuk will hurt more -Bards

Remember, best block, no be there - Mr. Miyagi

Re: GYE Haiku 11 Apr 2013 20:46 #204915

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Gee, why ee? Hai ku
non sense, wood ford, I like You
Guard Your Eyes, me too.
?דער באשעפער לאווט מיך אייביג. וויפיל לאוו איך עהם
My Creator loves me at all times. How great is my love for him?

Re: GYE Haiku 11 Apr 2013 20:50 #204917

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for a balding clay
fellow, you certainly can
write nice japanese poems
Sometimes life is like tuna with not enough mayonaise
~Inna beshem ZS

Give, Forgive
~Cordnoy

The reason I'm acting as if I'm pregnant, is because I'm expecting. I should be accepting.
~TZ

Re: GYE Haiku 11 Apr 2013 22:14 #204932

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For a Zemmy giraffe
Fellow, you certainly can
Make all of us laffe
?דער באשעפער לאווט מיך אייביג. וויפיל לאוו איך עהם
My Creator loves me at all times. How great is my love for him?

Re: GYE Haiku 11 Apr 2013 22:32 #204937

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Hippopotamus
Maneuverability
Snuffleupagus
Roy in the SA White Book noted that we frequently prayed and it did not work...because the best we could muster was begging G-d to "Please take it away, so I will not have to give it up!

No amount of sobriety can cure the insanity -ChaimCharlie

The emmes hurts but fake chizzuk will hurt more -Bards

Remember, best block, no be there - Mr. Miyagi
Last Edit: 11 Apr 2013 22:33 by reallygettingthere.

Re: GYE Haiku 12 Apr 2013 00:46 #204952

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Five syllables first
Seven syllables go here
Five more syllables
!אנא עבדא דקודשא בריך הוא

וּבְיָדְךָ כֹּחַ וּגְבוּרָה וּבְיָדְךָ לְגַדֵּל וּלְחַזֵּק לַכֹּל


"If it would be so easy there wouldn't be a GYE, but if it would be impossible there also wouldn't be a GYE."
"Sometimes a hard decision leads to an easier outcome."
- General Grant


My story: guardyoureyes.com/forum/19-Introduce-Yourself/111583-hello-my-friends
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