DISCLAIMER: This story can be triggering at times, but the author deems it necessary to be blunt about the temptations - just as we experience them on a daily basis, in order to illustrate how if not reigned in, they can lead to places many times worse and to pain many times greater. The story's purpose is to take the reader through the intense desires, pain, dissatisfaction and disappointments that the main characters go through - until hitting rock bottom, in the hope that it will suffice as a tangible portrayal and prediction of one who doesn't gain control. Reading the twisted justifications and wrongful self righteousness, and where they can lead, will hopefully remove the need for one to heaven forbid experience these unfortunate circumstances himself, to gain the clarity reached only through personal experience and realization. To achieve this effect, there can be triggering situations depicted at times. Reader discretion advised. 

Here's the situation as I see it. It's definitely not up to me. The Guard is the posek here. According to the ideas he wrote in his last post, for me continuing is not an option. All the ideas that everyone came up with is very nice, but not something I'm willing to implement.

Additionally, moving the story to the BB section is removing the main viewership from accessing the story. The primary intent is for bochurim to be educated how to create a marriage that is free of the terrible effects of uncontrolled lusting.

I'm asking The Guard to please post a final verdict about what is required by GYE standards. I will follow his psak.

Any questions, feel free to email or PM me.

                                    Grant